You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives.
• Explain when and how long you will be in town.
• Ask whether you can stay at their home.
• Offer to pay for yourself.
Dear Aunt,
I am planning a short visit in Landon. I have research on internet that long-term stay is very expensive in commercial hotels or guest houses. You will be very happy to hear that, I have chosen my study in UK history. I need to research on England history. England is very Magnificent country and Landon is the capital of country as well as this is old city.
I would like to ask your permission to stay at your house, it's been long to see my cousins and I will meet to you and your husband. I will not stay more than two months at your home. It will great if you allow me to stay with your family because I am new in this city and nobody is in my connection who is in this city. I would love to pay my expenditure, I do not want a burden upon you. I can understand Landon is an expensive city. It will be great if you allow me to stay at your house that will be means a lot for me. I will look forward to hear from you soon.
Regards,
Prabhjot Singh.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 544, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...means a lot for me. I will look forward to hear from you soon. Regards, Prabhjot Si...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.02577319588 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2528132175 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551546391753 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5100962845 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.0769230769 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34489225552 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109669901568 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847813260743 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241091063387 0.12726935374 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116812084775 0.0580467560999 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.5 8.71597938144 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.12 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.