Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a resident of Galaxy Enclave, seventh floor, sector 43. I am writing in connection for the requirement of new accommodation nearby Sector 43 only.
We moved to our current apartment six months back on rent, it is a family of four me, my wife with our two kids. However, in the next three months, my parents will join us, hence there will be a need for sufficient place for every family member. Therefore, my requirement is to find a suitable three bedroom apartment with attached washrooms and balcony, apart from this it should be spacious and well ventilated, keep in mind all sort of basic amenities in the vicinity as well.
I want to move within two months, as an examination of my children are expecting in the next four months, I do not want to disturb them around that time.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Your Faithfully,
ABC
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'apartment' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'apartments'.
Suggestion: apartments
...ent is to find a suitable three bedroom apartment with attached washrooms and balcony, ap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, apart from, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72727272727 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6621476017 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694805194805 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3955834424 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 4.34317383033 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13160960815 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617939278834 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580162440247 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0469688055129 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024529962547 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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