Dear Mr. Shelby,
I am your tenant for the past four months in your apartment 201, rockwood society building 3. This apartment is nearest to the language school center where I got admission to study French for my professional purposes.
There is no doubt about the serene surroundings and beautiful environment near your rental house but, I and my flatmates are facing an issue with the problem of using water in your apartment. The boiler is not heating the water and constantly stops working in the past few days. We called your maintenance guy, and he could not fix the issue permanently. He suggested buying a new boiler because the current one is in damped condition. Apart from this, we are unable to take showers in the morning before going to language school due to the cold weather and cold water. In the evening, we are unable to wash utensils after dinner because of the cold water. With these problems, life has become hard and I feel terribly without hot water.
Fortunately, I went to the market yesterday and found a new boiler which is not very expensive. I have enclosed all the details along with shop contact and address to buy the new boiler machine. Please grant money to your workmen and sent them to buy the new boiler machine. Without a boiler, there could risk of getting sick with using cold water in this cold weather. With such kind of risk, it will affect our learning at school. We could not take this kind of risk with our professional careers. Therefore, I urge you to take immediate action with this current problem in your flat.
I am looking forward to a quick resolution.
Yours sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, apart from, i feel, kind of, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 937.175257732 146% => OK
No of words: 289.0 206.0 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74740484429 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45966978582 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 127.690721649 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3062190669 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2222222222 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0555555556 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72222222222 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164432126908 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484233209613 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396080527861 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787863961983 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530317582126 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.