You are a student at an English language school and are living in private accommodation with other students from the school. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord.
In your letter
State you reason for writing
Describe the problem
Propose a solution
Dear Sir,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I am writing the epistle in reference to inform you about a recent breakdown with the heating system which has not been fixed despite multiple attempts by local workmen. Let me explain the situation.
To elucidate the central heating system in the house has stopped working due to short circuit. this was highlighted to your workmen but they were unable to fix this problem despite multiple attempts. As you are aware that supply of hot water is critical during winters and we need hot water for shower and washing clothes thus this problem is making our lives miserable.
Additionally I would like to highlight that I had called a local electrician who advised to replace the heating motor which would fix the problem as the motor is damaged therefore I would request you to send a technician who would be able to check the problem and provide a speedy resolution by replacement of motor.
I look forward to your immediate response.
Yours sincerely
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Hope this letter finds you in the pink o...
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Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...s stopped working due to short circuit. this was highlighted to your workmen but the...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...oblem is making our lives miserable. Additionally I would like to highlight that I had ca...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur immediate response. Yours sincerely Said
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83615819209 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50147902242 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.4106579799 44.8134815571 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1111111111 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172514662247 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551442500609 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535863372789 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087822599885 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057750214612 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.