You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him/her to the party. In your letter:
• explain the reason for the party
• give the date and time of the party
• suggest what the classmate could bring to the party
Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________
Dear Jack,
How’re you buddy? Actually, through this letter I would like to invite you on a surprise party I through for my African friend Lena.
Since you have never gets a chance to met her so you have a numerous questions running in your mind about her. To elaborate this, Lena is pursuing with me in my English language school and she always misses her home and feeling sick. Although, she was topper of her class and a winner of a scholarship, her performance in class is going downward these days.
To get her out of this situation I want to through a surprise party on her birthday. This party will held on Wilson Hotel near to our institution on 10th Nov. It starts at 10 o’clock and continue till midday. If you’ll free before this time then you can join me at 9 o’clock to make some arrangements.
She is found of Indian sweet dish Rice pudding. As you’re are very good cook. You could bring this to feel her jubilant. I hope you will also enjoy this party along with us.
Best regards,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 102, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
... party on her birthday. This party will held on Wilson Hotel near to our institution...
^^^^
Line 21, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...along with us. Best regards, Aman
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64171122995 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54428589539 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673796791444 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9682071345 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3571428571 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255958976968 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858674352533 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557171318987 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164528003245 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186955791361 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.