You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager, in your letter
• Ask for some time off to complete a qualification
• Suggest what you will do later at work if you have off time
• Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to ask permission of leave for six months for profit and loss course applied.
The course is for a long time to which I have to join soon as the classes have been scheduled to start from Monday next week. I cannot be able to come for the job because the timings are morning hours. I will appreciate for some financial help for the course and later you can reduce the amount from salary.
If I would complete this course I will allow myself to work for extra hours for the firm. later in my off time I will check the sales record and give you a complete report ready every week.
this increases my qualification which will help us in the future to be in a competitive level. At practical level I will be completely get a whole experienced on it.
I hope you will look into the matter and consider my request.
Yours faithfully,
Suzy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t week. I cannot be able to come for the job because the timings are morning hour...
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Line 6, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Later
...f to work for extra hours for the firm. later in my off time I will check the sales r...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... a complete report ready every week. this increases my qualification which will h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46951219512 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33964455524 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621951219512 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2646291007 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386336578181 0.216113520407 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132286122935 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682947905055 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177429136789 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975939638459 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.