Significant fragments of education for many years remained the same which includes reading, writing and maths. However, when there was introduction of computers, some people believe that it should be made as the next skill to be introduced in the list. I completely agree because implementing these skills leads to effortless work and advancement in these technology involves easy and error free work.
In earlier times, it was observed that there were only main three subjects that followed many discoveries and many inventions that we still considered as the most useful even today. For instance, Einstein who found the theory of gravity which came as an advanced thought not because of computers at that time but only due to these three subjects. Although these subjects involve high professional jobs but nowadays we find computers as more important than any other subject.
Moreover, it is believed by some people that computer must be added as the next big subject to the list of education today which follow jobs involving selling and buying products such as Amazon, searching, surfing, communication, entertainment, news, location and so on helps us in labour free work by reducing accidents and also in medical department leading to knowing and curing many diseases. As these skills increase job opportunities in many big companies leading to development of country.
To conclude, though traditional education parts are important, additional skill such as computers are considered by all the people in the world and finally leading to economic development of every country.
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- Nowadays people are influenced by fashion, in particular when choosing their clothes and hairstyle. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience. 56
- Both the rich and the poor find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree? 56
- Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth.Do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in correct place.What is your opinion about this? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., writing and maths. However, when there was introduction of computers, some peop...
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Line 1, column 352, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...s to effortless work and advancement in these technology involves easy and error free work. I...
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Line 5, column 398, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng to knowing and curing many diseases. As these skills increase job opportunities...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, still, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37450199203 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85100336495 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629482071713 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.3405793988 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.888888889 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254932765123 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104140876288 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850134831462 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159353681435 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942574785048 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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