You are studying for a qualification and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
* Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
* Suggest what you will do later at work if have time off
* Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to ask for an unpaid week of leave from June 20 till June 27, since I am taking an exam in the English language at Interpress school.
I have been preparing for this exam for two years, but I am still not sure that I am capable to pass it with a high score. Therefore, I am planning to prepare for it one more time this week. The exam occurs in Astana city on the 26 of June and last four four hours. However, I need to be in the this city early in the mooring, because the station is a a large distance from the examination centre. On my arrival from the test, I will promise to sort my correspondence with Microsoft Company about both installing and adjusting Microsoft Server 2018 in the office, so that we will meet the deadline. In addition, I can lead the next meeting with our company president for you. This test is important for me, because it will allow me to apply for the open position of a project manager, which requires a perfect knowledge of English as well as the presence of IELTS certificate, in England, where I can lead team maintaining a large project with British Airway.
I hope to receive your approval of my request within two days, so that I can commence to revise my learned material earlier. Thank you in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Sergei.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: four
... Astana city on the 26 of June and last four four hours. However, I need to be in the thi...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...ur four hours. However, I need to be in the this city early in the mooring, because the ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
... in the mooring, because the station is a a large distance from the examination cen...
^^^
Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... in the mooring, because the station is a a large distance from the examination c...
^
Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
... in the mooring, because the station is a a large distance from the examination cen...
^^^
Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nk you in advance. Yours faithfully, Sergei.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46058091286 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54799490296 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601659751037 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.0786939178 44.8134815571 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7272727273 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134735291193 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057444042313 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399563265491 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755769137258 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262858605228 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.