You are supposed to move into a new apartment next week but you cannot do so because of some problems. Write a letter to the landlored
. Explain your situation
. describe your problems
. tell him/her when you think you can move in
Dear Mr. Smith
I am your new tenant and supposed to shift in your new flat which is situated in the city centre near the Oxford university, next week. But, sorry to say, due to some circumstances, I will not be able to move into the apartment on coming Monday. In this letter, I am explaining my condition and when would I expect to shift in the flat.
I went to home before moving into the apartment and had to come back before Monday because I had to do a lot of packing and to shift the luggage to the new house. Suddenly, my mother's health got serious. We have to hospitalised her. So, in this situation, I would not be back before Monday. Being elder of all the siblings, it is my responsibility to take care of my mother. As soon as she will get discharge from the hospital, I will be back to Mumbai and do the shifting.
Hope that you would understand my condition and you should not worry about the rent. I will pay for entire month. Sorry for the inconvenience caused.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Flora Fernandas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41116751269 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56026841593 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593908629442 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6755196925 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0714285714 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0714285714 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21428571429 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249197923221 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684523213362 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610522766615 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141077334569 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399181743366 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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