You are taking a course at a local college. The deadline for your project was last week but you haven't finished it.
Write a letter to your lecturer. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain why you haven't handed in the project yet
request more time to do it.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to request an extension for submission of my project as the last date of submission has passed a few days ago.
I am Steve, a second year of your commerce class, having enrollment ID S2658. Firstly, I was given an assignment on the preparation of Balance-Sheet which is quite difficult to complete, however I put all my efforts to get it completed on time.
Firstly, I took three days leave in order to complete the task on time, but I met with an accident last week. Due to such uncertain circumstances, I was not able to devote my time on the project.
Although the deadline for the submission is over, I need extra time to finish the given task. Therefore, I hereby request you to give me five more days so that I can work on it and hand over the project.
I will be waiting for a positive response from your side.
Yours sincerely
Steve
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to request an e...
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...ubmission has passed a few days ago. I am Steve, a second year of your commer...
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...efforts to get it completed on time. Firstly, I took three days leave in orde...
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...le to devote my time on the project. Although the deadline for the submission...
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...ork on it and hand over the project. I will be waiting for a positive respons...
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... a positive response from your side. Yours sincerely Steve
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66257668712 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67086155558 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668711656442 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7319488588 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4444444444 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267462784882 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099548538094 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410027112321 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121947079552 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418135741011 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.