Some people like to travel outside their country. Others would rather travel to tourist spots in their own country first, before traveling abroad. Which do you prefer to do and why? Include specific details and example to support your choice.
Tourism is a major source of enjoyment for everyone. A section of society prefers to visit some exotic locations outland whereas others like to explore their own nation before going outside. I opt for the latest statement rather than the former one. I will scrutinize both the aspects with relevant facts to justify my selection.
There are many people who wish to spend their holidays abroad. This approach not only discourages local tourism but also limits the growth of tourist places. In other words, funds of a nation are spent by people on vacations in other countries rather than using them in our own land, which indirectly affects the economy of a region. She Lanka for instance was hit by an economic crisis despite being a tourist spot because people of their own nation prefer to spend their resources somewhere outside.
Visiting our homeland on the other hand provides a plethora of benefits. It boosts the infrastructural growth of a tourism place which ultimately enriches these citizens of a specific region. In order to achieve success in this sector, footfall of local travelers on a regular basis is crucial. If the frequency of visitors is high, it would encourage the locals to grow as an industry. For example, India being a diverse country, most Indians like to visit other states of their own country to have vacations which boosts the economy of the tourism industry.
In my opinion, I prefer to visit my country rather than going to some other parts of the world. This is because it encourages the nations’ as well as its citizens' growth.
To encapsulate, though it is a personal choice to select a destination for holiday, one should consider both its merits and demerits before opting such places. Therefore, using funds wisely is a necessity and everyone must think before spending them on other countries rather than their own.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'locations'' or 'location's'?
Suggestion: locations'; location's
...of society prefers to visit some exotic locations outland whereas others like to explore ...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...road. This approach not only discourages local tourism but also limits the growth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96496815287 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55055779084 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557324840764 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3743726316 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7058823529 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284706968861 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769129073605 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639657836623 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14835174061 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418348038187 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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