You are travelling and need someone to do you a favor while you are gone. Write a letter asking a neighbor or friend for help. In your letter include:
Where you are going
What the favor is?
Why you need this friend to help?
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in good health and spirits. Sorry, it’s taken me so long to write back. Anyways, I’m writing if you could do me a favor. I have planned a trip with my wife for our 10th anniversary but couldn’t take our son with us because of some inevitable situation.
Actually, my wife and I are going to Shimla for four days to celebrate our 10th wedding anniversary on 28th January. I booked air tickets and planned a surprise dinner at The Taj Hotel. After that, we will go for a long drive for sightseeing. How does this sound? By the way, to our surprise, we came to know that our son Vibhu can’t come with us because of his mid-term exams.
So, I thought, I’d ask you if you could take care of my son. I can assure you he is quite a decent boy and won’t bother you much. Like you, he also loves to play cricket, so, I’m sure you both would enjoy playing cricket in the garden.
I’d really appreciate your help in this situation. I can’t wait to hear from you.
Your friend,
Deepak Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, anyway, but, if, really, so, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58163265306 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46767418198 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673469387755 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7642809292 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.8666666667 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0666666667 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294537117698 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10813664643 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937294123376 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176048639078 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905181111879 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.