Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a resident of Lumus Residency, Redmond. The purpose of my writing is with the connection about disturbance caused by high sound and noise from your restaurant, which is impacting disturbance.
I am pursuing " Hotel Marketing" and it is my final year, I have to study for my examination, which is going to happen in next month. However, due to the noise from your place, it is very difficult to concentrate. The sound of music stays on high volume regardless of the time of the day, consequently, that interrupt the serenity of our vicinity. Not even me, several other residents are also feeling the same, young ones and old age persons are most affected.
I suggest you, firstly to keep the volume of music low, preferably use only when needed. Secondly, there should be a time limit around late hours, music should stop around ten at night, which is also regulated by government law. If the problem persists, I am afraid we have to make a complaint about it to the local council, apart from this, we will protest in front of the restaurant which will be not in the benefit of your business.
Looking for some prompt optimistic action from your side.
Your Faithfully,
Anna Mathew
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 437, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be not in the benefit of your business. Looking for some prompt optimistic actio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, apart from, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78873239437 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69926514311 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643192488263 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7225235135 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7272727273 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 4.34317383033 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115872126389 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379089119465 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419238601978 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669582634105 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350957329373 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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