Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to ask information regarding the hilly area of Northern Pakistan to spend my short holidays.
I just got the approval of my long-awaited holidays to fulfill my dream of visiting this area to relax and see the local culture of hosting. My duration of stay will of two weeks and to avoid the wastage of time I need to get the important information to plan my visit. I heard Pakistan Tourism Development Corporation is supportive in providing the guidance to international tourists. I intend to seek information about the interesting spots to explore the local area. I heard a lot of stories and seen great scenery in pictures only from one of my friends who recently visited this area, but I want to visit myself to feel the same. I am also keen to participate in the local events to get familiar with the local culture over there such as polo, local dance, a matrimonial ceremony.
I look forward to this information but not later than 23 August 2020 as my holidays are starting from 07th of August. You can send this via email or fax mentioned below.
Yours faithfully,
Jhon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to ask information regardin...
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...esting spots to explore the local area. I heard a lot of stories and seen great s...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... want to visit myself to feel the same. I am also keen to participate in the loca...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ocal dance, a matrimonial ceremony. I look forward to this information but no...
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Suggestion:
...ax mentioned below. Yours faithfully, Jhon
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, regarding, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67676767677 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73618073821 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631313131313 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1236275741 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110938271071 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442001881992 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0206449690055 0.0603063233224 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686484267443 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174688021198 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.