You are working for acompany. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
Explain why you want to take time off work
Give details of the amount of time you need
Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.
Dear Mr.smith,
I am writing to request some leave from november 1st to 10th.
As you know, my family lives in London. Recently my father has suffered some hurt problems. after medical tests, doctors understood that his hurt’s vessels could not carry blood properly. so, they want to do surgery. Because I am the older offspring and this is a very vital situation, I want to be near my family in order that I can support them financially and mentally.
The operation will be done on november 3rd. However, I have to go sooner to do the registering process. Besides that, I need to stay there one week after surgery to look after my father in the hospital. Although my family members can undertake these responsibilities, my presence is crucial for me to become calm and release my stress. so these are very reasons why I request for ten days working off.
I have done all the projects, which I undertook, and asked one of my colleagues to commit my responsibilities in this period. she works in the same sector as me. As a result, she is knowledgable enough for this role. I hope that my request does not cause you any inconvenience.
Thanks for your help and support,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 93, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...father has suffered some hurt problems. after medical tests, doctors understood that ...
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Line 9, column 194, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...vessels could not carry blood properly. so, they want to do surgery. Because I am ...
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Line 13, column 337, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...e to become calm and release my stress. so these are very reasons why I request fo...
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Line 17, column 127, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...mit my responsibilities in this period. she works in the same sector as me. As a re...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, look, so, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73684210526 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80159781991 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645933014354 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.68268004 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.875 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0625 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140034068294 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481274497185 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045497400144 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083007193868 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446685826376 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.32 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.