Dear Sir,
I am a resident doctor working in the general ward of this hospital, I am writing to request to grant me ten days of leaves.
I am working in this hospital sincerely and diligently since three years but from past few weeks I am experiencing severe headaches along with giddiness. So,I consulted Dr Sudhir, a reputed neurologist of our hospital and according to him, it is due to the work stress and lack of sleep. Also, he advised me to take rest for some days in addition to the prescribed medicines.
Therefore, I have decided to visit Manali which not only is my home town but has good climate too that is required for my relaxation. This way I can spend some quality time with my parents and it will aid in my rejuvenation as well.
Furthermore, I have convinced Dr James to look after the general ward in my absence, hence, the quality of the treatment provided to the patients will not be compromised.
My sincere apologies for the inconvenience caused, I'd be grateful if you can grant me ten days of leave.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, therefore, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76905154926 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.2340504144 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 4.34317383033 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132589433194 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548327427751 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315326927043 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560071892933 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314192367883 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.