You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter
• explain why you want to take time off work
• give details of the amount of time you need
• suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Mr. Khoury,
I am writing this letter to ask you for an approval for my annual leave that will take place next coming month. As you may know, I have completed my course in biotechnology and the deadline of my thesis is on June 30.
In fact, I need three weeks off so I can be well prepared and organized all the materials that I have in hand .Furthermore, by getting my master I will be officially promoted to senior officer as you promised me in my last appraisal. In addition, I would be able to replace you when you are out of office since I have learned statistics very well.
Unfortunately, I will not have access to my e-mails and can answer the emergency calls only. I have already spoken with my colleague John who will be responsible to carry out my tasks during my absence. In addition, I will promise you that when i will be back i will get earlier to my duty and try to work during weekends to cope with the tasks that i have already missed.
Looking forward to hear from you
Yours sincerely,
Rana Kandar
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- Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view? 61
- The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries.Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions. 73
- Some people warn that the era of silver screen is coming to an end and that people will eventually lose interest in going to the cinema.Do you agree or disagree with this view? 78
- Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages Do you agree or disagree Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car 84
- In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ed all the materials that I have in hand .Furthermore, by getting my master I will...
^^
Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
... all the materials that I have in hand .Furthermore, by getting my master I will be officia...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 246, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... addition, I will promise you that when i will be back i will get earlier to my d...
^
Line 11, column 261, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ll promise you that when i will be back i will get earlier to my duty and try to ...
^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... have already missed. Looking forward to hear from you Yours sincerely, Rana ...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ssed. Looking forward to hear from you Yours sincerely, Rana Kandar
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, look, may, so, well, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43005181347 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54538655702 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60621761658 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.218253805 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172769153281 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863078299316 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624165334544 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114943913431 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487811967727 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.