Dear Sir,
Hope your day is going great. I'm writing this letter with respect to what I bought from your company which was delivered to me today being 7th February 2023.
The order I placed above from your company "Jumia" was a playstation 5 with the order number 2345j, and this order was made on the 5th of February 2023 which was on a Friday.
However, upon receiving the delivery, I noticed that one of the pads for playing the game was faulty, and I also realized that the power cable was faulty because the game console kept on tripping. Furthermore, whenever the game is plugged to power, it takes a while to boot the system.
Therefore, I will suggest that game consoles should be thoroughly checked by your staff so that your company will not receive numerous complaints from customers. Also, your staff should be given orientation on customer satisfaction after they gain employment into your company. Generally, this will help improve the company's service.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Hope your day is going great. Im writing...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, so, therefore, while, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9578313253 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64098061951 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650602409639 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3793909201 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 4.34317383033 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120160505953 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505347341919 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443668480731 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757025422545 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485580549742 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.