You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:-Explain the important-Apologize for the situation-Suggest a new arrangement

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You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
-Explain the important
-Apologize for the situation
-Suggest a new arrangement

Dear Raj,

I am writing to inform you on delaying my visit in your place as supposed to what we had last talked about.

It is my utmost regret to tell you that I cannot be able to leave our province on the 20th of January next year because my brother, Francis, suddenly decided to hold his wedding on the 24th. It has been a swift change of plans on my part and I apologize for this short notice. I know that you have been excited since I booked my flight to London and I really missed you very much after five years of not seeing you, it makes me wonder how you have become now.

After the wedding, I can already be available and in no time, I will definitely be there. I changed my flight schedule to 26th of January, making myself available on the 27th as a godparent of your daughter, Angeline. I have also extended my stay to four weeks instead of two weeks to spend more time with you and your family. We have plenty of stories to catch up together since we parted ways, so be ready with it.

Again, I apologize for the inconvenience. I look forward to seeing you soon. Please contact me through skype should you need to clarify our schedules and need further arrangement.

Regards,
Mansi Gosar

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Raj, I hope this letter reaches you in the be...
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Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... reaches you in the best of your health.I know you might be excited and making al...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...or my visit to your place, but it seems i will have to postpone my trip due to my...
^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...h has been arranged in the same week. it is quite a sudden plan to prepone his m...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...gize you for the change in my dates and i assure you that i with you the next wee...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...you the next weekend post the marriage. Also i am extending my stay by a week to spe...
^^^^
Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he next weekend post the marriage. Also i am extending my stay by a week to spend...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...s. I look forward to seeing you soon. you may contact me in case of any clarifica...
^^^
Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... clarification for my revised schedule. Regards, Mansi Gosar
^^^^^
Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n for my revised schedule. Regards, Mansi Gosar
^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... schedule. Regards, Mansi Gosar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28813559322 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40005958197 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649717514124 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2501281364 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244765701682 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877627064798 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717428183547 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12519409483 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633536497405 0.0580467560999 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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