You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
-Explain the important
-Apologize for the situation
-Suggest a new arrangement
Dear john,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and to the best of spirits. I know you must be very excited about my visit to your place but unfortunately I have to postpone my plan due to some other important commitments.
this morning, I received a letter from my NRI brother Harry and he is coming to visit home at the same time we planned to meet. As we had not seen him from long time since his studies in USA, we all are very excited to meet him and spend some quality time together. Also we had to visit some of our relatives and take a tour to nearby attractions and temples, so I would be really busy during those days.
I really apologize for rescheduling my visit to your place because Harry had even booked the tickets and taken leaves from his office otherwise he could have changed his visit plan to India. he do not visit us very often so it is really special family get together event that I cannot afford to miss.
By the way, my business would be little slow in coming summers, I could make a visit to you at that time, if it is convenient to you. I will have even more time to spent with you and cover the attractions.
Once again I am sorry from the bottom of my heart for the inconvenience caused. Hope you understand my situation. Hope to see with you soon. warm regards Daniel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear john, I hope this letter finds you in radiant ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...o some other important commitments. this morning, I received a letter from my NR...
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Line 4, column 267, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...m and spend some quality time together. Also we had to visit some of our relatives a...
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Line 4, column 406, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...would be really busy during those days. I really apologize for rescheduling my v...
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Line 6, column 192, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...d have changed his visit plan to India. he do not visit us very often so it is rea...
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Line 6, column 195, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...ave changed his visit plan to India. he do not visit us very often so it is really...
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Line 10, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y situation. Hope to see with you soon. warm regards ...
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Line 10, column 440, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Warm
... warm regards ...
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Line 10, column 452, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... warm regards Daniel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27490039841 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32656360497 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573705179283 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2309612181 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5384615385 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213346577347 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747732883612 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518242656696 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12366858338 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500892567348 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.