Dear Librarian,
My name is John, a computer science student at your college. The purpose of this missive to apprise about the books borrowed from the library. However, acquiring three books from the author Kimberly for my studies. Regrettably, cannot return these books according to schedule because my paternal uncle had a car accident while travelling to South Carolina.
Furthermore, the day before yesterday hospital management informed about the incident, therefore, had to travel to see my uncle for hospitality as his family is out of the country for recess and cannot attend him until the departure date. In addition to this, unable to attend college for a further one week.
Accordingly, you may renew or extend the registration for these books on my name. Alternately, happy to pay the supplementary cost. However, according to rules notifying in advance to consider any reimbursement. Besides, apologise for the inconvenience affront because of an emergency.
I look forward to a swift response.
Yours Faithfully,
John Moses
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42073170732 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99222545055 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701219512195 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.3887082319 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0833333333 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146382891528 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510924249839 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062848613515 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685285549432 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639860144329 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 70.7449484536 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.