You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Neighbours,
My name is John employed in a multinational organisation as a Software engineer. Recently, moved into the house next to your home along with my wife and daughters. However, we have decided to throw a party held at our home. Therefore, to apprise about any inconvenience or disturbance may be incurred during hours 9 am to 4 am w.e.f Saturday, 13 January because of noises.
Furthermore, the musical show has been organised to entertain our guest. Besides, Jennifer Lopez and two other singers give performances by singing the latest or 90's blockbusters. In addition to this, the party commence with dinner having several items such as roasted chickens, salad, pizza and barbeque and ends with breakfast.
Moreover, please write about the obligations or objections foreseen. It would be a pleasure inviting you along with your family and meeting you. I hope to see you soon.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
John Moses
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13836477987 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91158969208 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.761006289308 0.622605031667 122% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3082547169 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0833333333 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 4.34317383033 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212691200035 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072423541086 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811534119243 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10142708141 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662866866791 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.64 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.