You bought a music concert ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you want to offer the ticket to your friend.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• explain the concert
• why you are unable to go
• how can your friend receive the ticket
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Simon,
Hope you’re in good health. I am writing this letter to offer you passes of A.R.Rehman concert which is on 21st August 2019.
I have purchased concert tickets for me and my sister as we both are die hard fans of A.R. Rehman. It will be held in Jio garden at 6pm which is located at Bandra kurla complex, Mumbai. You will be aware that my podcasts is full of his songs and never miss any of his concert if it is in our town. Also my sister is a guitarist and she has one guitar which is signed by the great legend.
Due to some unavoidable circumstances, we will not be able to attend the show. My boss has just informed me that I’m going to be speaking at a International conference which is for two days starting from 21st August till 23rd August 2019 in Dubai. Also, my sister is going to attend her friend’s wedding.
So, I would like to ask if you’re interested to attend the concert. As I know, you are also great fan of this musician. If interested, I can handover the passes to you while leaving for the airport or you can collect it from my residence during the daytime.
Do let me know.
Best regards,
Tim Frank
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-08-20 | sdrocks91 | 73 | view |
| 2018-10-09 | sukhman sidhu | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Rehman
... this letter to offer you passes of A.R.Rehman concert which is on 21st August 2019. ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ny of his concert if it is in our town. Also my sister is a guitarist and she has on...
^^^^
Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e that I'm going to be speaking at a International conference which is for t...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41935483871 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50962174011 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617511520737 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7543662366 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.35714285714 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199149232516 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690721048921 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629085317652 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139694621573 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733875847936 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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