You bought a new HD television last week At first it seemed to work perfectly but after a few hours a line appeared across the TV and the sound seemed a little strange You cannot take the TV back to the shop so you decide to write to them Write a letter o

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You bought a new HD television last week. At first it seemed to work perfectly but after a few hours a line appeared across the TV and the sound seemed a little strange. You cannot take the TV back to the shop so you decide to write to them.
Write a letter of complaint to the shop. In your letter
• give them the background information
• describe the problem
• ask them to resolve the issue

Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform that we have recetly purchased HD Television a week ago. It was working fne initially but now is causing problmes.
When I reached home and set up the Television, it was working seemlessly perfect and I was very happy with my puchase. But tehn I observed starnge lines on scree, first I thought there might be connection issue, I checked for wiring, it was pulgges in correctly. I tried to switch channels as well to verift if the issue is with channel or Television itslef. After minutes I realise that there was an issue with Audio as well, it was not syncing properly. At last, I switch it off and turn it back again, but the same issue persists and then I consider toinform you about that.
I want assistance from you to resolve that issue. Unfortunately, due to an emergency I personally cannot visit the store. Hence, I want you to take required setps, if possible, you can send someone at my place to investigate the issue or what seems right according to you can be done. I have the warranty card and Insurance documents with me which are attached below.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully
Mandeep

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, so, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64593301435 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58214553452 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66985645933 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1298189239 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6923076923 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212343457407 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557401226567 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060481798228 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102509601551 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672347828252 0.0580467560999 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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