You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to
1- Explain the reason why you decline the offer
2- Express you gratitude
3- Explain you like your current job very much
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I will be unable to join your reputable company next month based on your official offer to me.
The offer is signed off, but I made a second thought to stay in my current position at Morley Parsons. Although your company aims fits my skills, its location is very far from where I am currently living. I won’t be an added value to your team after getting drained from the travel back and forth from your company.
When I got your valuable offer, it was a push forward step in my career. Therefore, I am very thankful for selecting of my Resume to join your prestigious team. Please send my very best regards to all managers and directors, especially Mr. Hemedia, who interviewed and approved me as one of the new team.
Recently, I am handling the project`s department at my company, and I am fascinated with the daily activities either with colleagues or clients. This position helps to me to improve my proficiency. Not only it allows me to deal with different clients locally, but also pushes me to get in touch with different people from all over the world.
I look forward to receiving your acknowledgement.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77830188679 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76565980455 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650943396226 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7767465053 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4166666667 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12972713927 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479683751997 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501976431644 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789137158597 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699599346668 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.