Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to enquire about a book which is not available in the local shops in my city. Allow me to elaborate.
The book that I have been desperately looking for is titled “Interview Tips”. It is a very old title written by Jeremy Mathews and was published by Penguin Book House, Antwerp.
Further, the book has been in tremendous demand in recent weeks because it was featured on a tv series. As a result, the stores are running short on supply. I am looking for the said book to prepare for an upcoming interview that I have with the Ministry of Defense. The book may not seem like a valuable one, but it has in store a lot of valuable information in-store.
Finally, coming on to the important aspect of payment. I can Interac you the payment on your registered company email address or even ask a friend of mine to come and pick it up from your store if you can possibly arrange the said title.
I will be waiting for a positive reply.
Yours sincerely,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to enquire about a book whi...
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...e and pick it up from your store if you can possibly arrange the said title. I will be wa...
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...r a positive reply. Yours sincerely, Brad Jason
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, may, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56830601093 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6351492304 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650273224044 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.374579729 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6666666667 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242029545802 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642984862386 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536900069546 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112263408033 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345410208696 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.