You found a job opportunity in a foreign country. Write a letter to your friend who knows about the country . In your letter mention the following.
-What is the nature of your future job?
- Why did you apply for that job?
- Ask for details and his/her advice about the country .
Dear Sanjay,
Hope this letter will find you in pink of your health. I had come across a job opportunity at British Columbia, Canada for what I have applied for last week. As you have an experience of living three for more than 6 years, I am writing this letter to get your views about the country and its culture beforehand.
As you are aware that I am aspiring to get settle in Canada since long where this mail arrived in my mailbox as a hope to realise my dream. The best aspect of the job offer is that It contains job profile of Human resource which I am practicing sing 9 years. It is my domain of work and expertise. I am well versed in all HR functions mentioned in the job description. Hence, the location, Job profile and the salary associated with it has attracted me to apply for this opening.
I would be grateful if you can give me your insight about the country, monthly living expenses and other important informations required for the smooth settlement in foreign land.
With best regards,
Your loving friend,
XXX
- The only reason people work hard is to earn more money There are no other reasons to do it To what extent do you agree or disagree 82
- Most people believe that the best way to spend holidays is by going abroad, staying at a hotel and enjoying the local attractions. Do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give your own opinion and include relevant examples. 89
- Some people think that you need more money to be happy while others prefer to have more free time than money discuss both views and give your own opinion 87
- You are the manager of a restaurant that has received a letter of complaint about the poor service from a member of your staff Write a letter of apology to the person who has complained In your letter say how sorry you are that the person has had a poor e 73
- There are many different types of music in the world today why do we need music Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere now a days 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ure beforehand. As you are aware that I am aspiring to get settle in Canada si...
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Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to realise my dream. The best aspect of the job offer is that It contains job pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5873015873 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49502177844 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640211640212 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0214720335 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371657752526 0.216113520407 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126705914783 0.0766984524023 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066516680275 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227356942713 0.12726935374 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888778203555 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.