Hi Ryan,
It's been a long time since we last met during your visit to India. I had a wonderful time meeting your family. Anyway, I want to share some exciting news about my next job. I recently cleared an interview with Apple for the role of a Salesforce Developer and they are now preparing the documents for my visa.
As of now, the assignment is for a duration of two years whereafter a new project will be assigned if my performance meets their expectations. During this period, I will be working on their new application related to bank transactions and purchases.
The reason behind my job switch is my interest in visiting foreign countries to gain a global exposure. Moreover, Apple is my favorite company owing to its best workplace ethics and treatment of its employees, and I am happy to secure a job in such a reputed firm.
However, as you reside in the same city, I thought you know a lot of things about the job and location. I would be more than happy to know about the weather, accommodation and the amount of money to carry. So, please reply at your earliest convenience.
I can't wait to meet you soon.
Best regards,
Jonathon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...eply at your earliest convenience. I cant wait to meet you soon. Best regards,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, however, if, moreover, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62801932367 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70421820457 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647342995169 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5720412739 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6923076923 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21637117015 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685440222846 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049226189454 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107740481539 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063091410151 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.