Dear Wang,
I hope this mail finds you in good health. I had successfully nailed down a job in Seattle, USA. Since you have been in USA for more than 4 years, I am writing this in hope you will provide some advice on finding a house to rent and health care insurance registration.
The job is from a startup company in tech sector, it was founded 2 years ago, the company seems running fine. I applied the software engineer position which involves some code writing and infrastructure building which is my favorite part in technology. The job description says it requires a lot of hard problem solving, which I think is my strongest area, the salary will provide my family a good living condition. Also, as you know, I've been keen to work in America for a long time, this is an opportunity for me to realize the dream. I could not miss this.
As you may already know, the process of settlement may be complicated and time consuming, so your insight will be very helpful.
With best wishes,
Your loving friend,
XXX
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...od living condition. Also, as you know, Ive been keen to work in America for a long...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60869565217 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58967248734 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679347826087 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1079833959 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236118299672 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077132672159 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042649979102 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128489648119 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210141128158 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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