You go to a gym to carry out exercise every day. One day, you have forgotten your bag and the gym management has announced that they would keep the gym closed for a week for some renovation work. You need your bag as it has some important things in it.
Write a letter to the manager of the gym. In your letter
- introduce yourself and describe your problem
- give a description of your bag
- tell them what you want them to do
Dear Sir,
My Name is Antonio Rodrigues. I am a permanent member of your gym since its inception. My ID number is 1234P. I am writing this letter in connection with the bag which I forgot to pick from the locker before leaving the gym.
It is a leather bag of black colour with the brand name “Decathlon” embedded on it. The bag has my driving license and Aadhar card along with some gym accessories. I am not worried about the gym accessories; however, I need those documents to submit to the Passport Department for processing during this week.
I am aware that the gym will be closed for renovation for the rest of week and you had informed us well in advance that entry in the gym will not be permitted during this time. At the same time, I would really appreciate if you can allow me 15 mins tomorrow to fetch my bag. During this time, I will ensure that my presence will not impact the renovation work in any way.
I am looking forward to hearing a positive response from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Nilesh J Pandey
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53968253968 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73117367624 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7044207019 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290568020037 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927153158893 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653230940412 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150749612148 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513770983801 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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