You had a meal at a restaurant. You are not happy with the service. Write to the manager to complain about it. Give details about the problems and request some compensation or refund.
Dear Mr. Patel,
My friends and I had visited you restaurant last Sunday. I am writing this letter to complain about the dissatisfied food and service. As a reputed restaurant like yours I never imagined such a mediocre service and food quality.
First of all, the waiter who served us the soup had dip his thumb in one of the bowls and delivered as it is to us. The curry spilt by another waiter on my friend's lap and he even did not care to apologize. I really disheartened to see your inconsiderate staff and their pathetic behavior. Finally, the food served to us was not good enough at that price. The soup was too sour with overcooked vegetable. The desserts were also stale. I am affraid to tell you that one of my friends and I had severe stomach aches the day after.
I am completely dissatisfied and ought to get compensation for this meal. I am attaching copy of bill with this letter. I hope to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Komal Lad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'dipped'.
Suggestion: dipped
..., the waiter who served us the soup had dip his thumb in one of the bowls and deliv...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ught to get compensation for this meal. I am attaching copy of bill with this let...
^
Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ttaching copy of bill with this letter. I hope to hearing from you soon. Your...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, really, so, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52840909091 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6274769404 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647727272727 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2697933151 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.9285714286 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5714285714 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164592924993 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497771715092 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055536563138 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115738924281 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406997550038 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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