you had a meeting of a company in a hotel where you were disappointed from their hall setup. write a letter to give suggesstion .
Dear Mr Harris,
My name is Chi Chung and a customer who have rented a car from your agency with ID number DE346576 on 24th August for a week. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with your car.
As I am a tourist here, And it makes me convenience to visit the sights with my rental car, Seriously I need a car that have a strong offline GPS with speaker who guided me while I’m driving. Unfortunately, despite of the car’s catalog and your advice about The strong GPS that this car have, it brings me nothing but problems. To elucidate, Firstly, The navigation has a chronic matter which caused me to lost in rural . Secondly I had to waste 13 hours to find the way back to hotel. I would like your company compensate me since all the consequences are caused by your company. Also, I am entitled to get my money back as your website description indicates. I am contacted at the address supplied. Your assistance in this matter is greatly appreciated.
Your sincerely,
Chi Chung
- You have seen an advertisement in an australian magazine for someone tolive with a family for six month and look after their six year old child.Explain why you would like the jobGive details of why you would be a suitable person to employSay how you would 84
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 61
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their wast 56
- Write a letter to a friend telling him/her that you’re going back to your home town and you want to give him/her some furniture. Please say– why you thought about him/her– describe the furniture– suggest a way for him/her to get it 61
- You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. Say where you think you left the papers. Explain why they are so important. Tell the 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Harris, My name is Chi Chung and a customer who ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th ID number DE346576 on 24th August for a week. I am writing this letter to expr...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ess my dissatisfaction with your car. As I am a tourist here, And it makes me ...
^^^
Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r who guided me while I'm driving. Unfortunately, despite of the car's...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut The strong GPS that this car have, it brings me nothing but problems. To eluci...
^^
Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... matter which caused me to lost in rural . Secondly I had to waste 13 hours to fin...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62430939227 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76899091932 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646408839779 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7516899474 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0909090909 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0435707572119 0.216113520407 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0200519384791 0.0766984524023 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310944953557 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0437950991098 0.12726935374 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162492222222 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.