You have an appointment with your manager the next day. Write him/her a letter about what you’re going to discuss at the meeting. In your meeting, you should tell:
What did you do for the company during the years you worked there
What changes you would like to recommend
What training you require
Dear Mr. Sam,
I am reaching out to you for discussing few concerns prior to our meeting going to held tomorrow at Amed Plaza, at 11.00 AM. Being our company representative, it’s been a honour for me to present our organisation worldwide where I was able to crack profitable deals with other parties to collaborate with our company.I must appreciate your training sessions, it would have been impossible without those period of learning business.
Would you mind if I mention ares that needs some alteration for progression of company? I would never demand for changes rather I prefer to share my thoughts for hike in sales. What about swapping each employee’s task with other workers to get insights of entire business? This would not only help them to understand how important assets everyone is, but also they will ger a break from monotonous working schedule, rising productivity of company.
Having said that, the formal education one had is enough for that, however one day training session to hands on equipment would be a need to meed the new strategy of working like others. I’m confident you would consider my ideas and you will be optimistic in our meeting.
I really appreciate you spare time to have a look over my written agenda for upcoming business discussion.
Regards,
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2022-08-14 | anonymous24 | view | |
| 2022-08-14 | anonymous24 | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
... concerns prior to our meeting going to held tomorrow at Amed Plaza, at 11.00 AM. Be...
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Line 2, column 170, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...g our company representative, it’s been a honour for me to present our organisati...
^
Line 2, column 318, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...parties to collaborate with our company.I must appreciate your training sessions,...
^
Line 8, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... upcoming business discussion. Regards,
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00921658986 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71800344706 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.728110599078 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0551756493 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.777777778 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302542546819 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118254765035 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692762944644 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16907761563 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190516264183 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.