Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns. Include:
where you live
what the problem is
what he should do
Dear sir,
I am Priya, one of your tenants, who has been living here for two months at the block number 24 of your flat. Since the beginning, when I started to live here I have faced no problem; however, these days there is a disturbance that is creating a lot of problem for me.
I am writing this letter to complain in the strongest terms about the noise which I hear on the daily basis from from the block which is adjacent to me, that is number 25. Actually, the couple who is residing there organises house warming party for their friends after every three days.And they also arrange a Home DJ as well. Because of which, there is a great hustle and bustle as their guests cross from the front of my apartment's door as noise of their feet disturb me a lot. Apart from this, they play music till 12 AM without thinking of their neighbours in a sense that they are disturbing them.
I also want to inform you that one day a request had been made by me not to play loud music in the late night, after that no action was taken by them.Therefore,I had to write a letter to you so that you will send them a notice not to create such kind of disturbance because I have to sleep early due to my strict office hours.Infact, sometimes they shout also that create a fear in all the residents’ mind. So there is a need of a strict action to be taken.
It would be appreciated by me if you look into this matter as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Priya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 245, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
...there is a disturbance that is creating a lot of problem for me. I am writing this letter to co...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: from
...e noise which I hear on the daily basis from from the block which is adjacent to me, tha...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich I hear on the daily basis from from the block which is adjacent to me, that ...
^^
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s residing there organises house warming party for their friends after every thre...
^^
Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...or their friends after every three days.And they also arrange a Home DJ as well. Be...
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Line 4, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
... after that no action was taken by them.Therefore,I had to write a letter to you so that ...
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Line 4, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...at no action was taken by them.Therefore,I had to write a letter to you so that yo...
^^
Line 4, column 326, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Infact
...eep early due to my strict office hours.Infact, sometimes they shout also that create ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, apart from, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.03092783505 429% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 278.0 206.0 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24460431655 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38152316931 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589928057554 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 355.5 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.6905211141 44.8134815571 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 118.0 76.5299724578 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 16.8248392259 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151012456168 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584012991362 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057075612214 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079641530127 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384839643929 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.61 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.