Dear Stanley,
I’ve been looking forward to my trip to Canada which is on the 3rd of February 2022, but unfortunately a very important event just came up. I’d have to reschedule because of it.
Do you remember my younger sister “Mary”? Her long time boyfriend is planning a surprise engagement party for her and this would take place on the 1st of February 2022 at my residence. He called me last night to inform me about this. It’s going to be magical for the both of them.
Also, I want to apologize for the disappointment this has caused despite the fact that arrangements where already in place for my visit to Canada. I haven’t forgotten everything we planned to do when I come so I’m looking forward to each of them. I know my apologies have been accepted my friend.
My one year study leaves starts on the 1st of April 2022. I’m suggesting that I come to Canada on the 2nd of April 2022 first before I leave for my school which is in Mexico. However, I can still visit during the summer holidays or the Christmas holidays later in the year.
Can’t wait to see you.
Adam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Stanley, I’ve been looking forward to my trip to ...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ear. Can’t wait to see you. Adam
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52537125983 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.90871741 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4615384615 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169158033655 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572868136626 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441830171545 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924604952722 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373917507138 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.