Dear Mr Sam
I hope your day is going great. When I was traveling to Peru on the 23rd of January 2023, I read your article entitled "A brief History About Nigerian Tribes". I came across the part where you wrote that Kings are called "Odogwu" in Igbo Language. This information is incorrect.
The Igbos who are part of the tribes in Nigeria call their King "Eze" rather than the information given in your article. This Nigerian tribe is the only tribe who refer to their Kings as Eze given that their language is unique. However, people also bear Eze as a name in the Igbo tribe.
It is expedient that your magazine publishes the right information so that the readers will be informed with the right information. People need to be able to communicate the right facts, and they need to be confident that the information is accurate whenever a conversation ensues.
In my opinion, I suggest that your team should endeavor to always crosscheck any information on ground before making it public. This will help eliminate errors, and dissiminate the right information to the readers because they need articles with accurate informations.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Adam Grant
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07317073171 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90514733244 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4912697262 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196626995986 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747424291115 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056070659179 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981416509754 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509234008528 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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