you have arranged a visit to close friend in Canada but an important event at home now means you will have to change the dates of visit write a letter to your friend In letter explain the important event apologize for the situation suggest a new arrangeme

Dear Sudheer,

I hope this letter finds you in the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to inform you about the procrastination of my Canada trip.

The reason behind this postponement is that my maternal grandfather has passed away recently and because of the same reason I have been to my native place. Moreover, I have to be here for more than two weeks. As I am the only grandson, I have a plethora of responsibilities such as receiving guests, maintaining the home, and doing running errands.

I can assume that this news would make you sorrowful as you were near and dear to him, things are the same for me here as well. After reading this letter, I hope you can understand my situation and accept my apologies for this delay.

Cremations and all the rituals will be completed in a couple of weeks, therefore, please arrange accommodation after the 1st week of July. I have already booked my flight.
It would be wonderful to see you after so long and I really wanted to meet you as much as you do.

Can’t wait to see you.

With best regards,
Rakesh

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sudheer, I hope this letter finds you in the best...
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...the procrastination of my Canada trip. The reason behind this postponement is t...
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...g the home, and doing running errands. I can assume that this news would make y...
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...nd accept my apologies for this delay. Cremations and all the rituals will be c...
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...wanted to meet you as much as you do. Can’t wait to see you. With best reg...
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...as you do. Can’t wait to see you. With best regards, Rakesh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, really, so, therefore, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59278350515 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66492851296 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9042190544 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.25 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207366162104 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792474738382 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413556138576 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110462438566 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373024191002 0.0580467560999 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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