You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish.
Write a letter to the admissions tutor:
explain your position.
apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day.
ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.
Dear Mrs Jones,
In this letter, I am writing to apologize that it is impossible for me to participate in the interview tomorrow evening for the following reasons. However, I intend to take the computer programming course in Cambridge University.
Tomorrow morning I am leaving at 6:00 am for Almaty to join my brother's graduation from National University. Although I have tried to skip this event, my family insists on my presence. As a result, I have to change my plans regarding our appointment. Nevertheless, it would be great, if you postpone it till the next week, so that I would not to miss the opportunity to enroll for the important course.
It would also be useful, if you share some details about the upcoming interview. First of all, I want to know how long it will last. I need to be aware of it in order to fit it in my tight schedule. Secondly, I would like you to say whether the meeting will require me to take an examination. This information would enable me to prepare well for it. You can either send a message to my email address or call me on the following number.
Yours sincerely,
Tolegen
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65671641791 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79493968262 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621890547264 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2980955143 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142861087831 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474741641464 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279777076783 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932087654406 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00240026688448 0.0580467560999 4% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.