You have been selected for a training course on computer skills that you cannot attend Write a letter to your employer and say Explain how this training course would help you Why won t you be able to attend it Suggest a way to have that training again

Essay topics:

You have been selected for a training course on computer skills that you cannot attend. Write a letter to your employer and say:
 Explain how this training course would help you
 Why won’t you be able to attend it
 Suggest a way to have that training again

Dear Sir,

I am writing to inform you that I would not be able to attend the training program arranged by the company.

This computer-aided design (CAD) course training program which is going to start next Friday in the offices meeting hall at 10:00 am is will help me in making designs as per the demand of the clients. This program will make me equipped with graphic design features also will decrease my dependency on graphic designers. Apart from all this, there will only one person handles the whole program and duties will be performed deliberately.

Unfortunately, I would not be able to attend the course because I have to leave for a meeting with a client in Delhi on Friday and will be back by Monday only. If the project details would be as per our norms then I might extend my time period of stay.

I would like to say kindly arrange the course either online in the evening so that I can access it while sitting in Delhi or delay the course for at least one week.

I look forward to hearing the best way you choose to get a training program.

Yours Faithfully,
Jot

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, then, while, apart from, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57575757576 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40546176469 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616161616162 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2837588754 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.666666667 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286500235564 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114527465938 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932014232159 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176663659001 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925283174739 0.0580467560999 159% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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