You have been selected for a training course on computer skills that you cannot attend. Write a letter to your employer and say:
Explain how this training course would help you
Why won’t you be able to attend it
Suggest a way to have that training again
Dear Sir,
My name is Jot and I am a senior software engineer. I am writing to thank you for selecting me for this training but I would not be able to attend the training program arranged by the company.
This computer-aided design (CAD) course training program which is going to start next Friday in the offices meeting hall at 10:00 am will help me in making designs as per the demand of the clients. This program will not only equip with graphic design features but also decrease my dependency on graphic designers. Apart from all this, the system will become more centralized.
Unfortunately, I would not be able to attend the course because I have to leave for a meeting with the client in Delhi on Friday and will be back by Monday only. If the project details would be as per our norms then it might extend my time period of stay.
I would like to say kindly arrange the course either online in the evening so that I can access it while sitting in Delhi or delay the course for at least one week.
I look forward to hearing the best way you choose to get a training program.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, while, apart from, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55609756098 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39176656329 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60487804878 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.3114710174 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32861514725 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113133266357 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120817916688 0.0603063233224 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174796557683 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852660350477 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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