You have begun a new course at university and the professor gave you the first assignment of the course You are not sure how to write the assignment Write an email to your professor In your letter state your purpose explain the problem ask for an appointm

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You have begun a new course at university and the professor gave you the 
first assignment of the course. You are not sure how to write the 
assignment.
Write an email to your professor. In your letter:
- state your purpose;
- explain the problem;
- ask for an appointment to discuss it

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to request to teach me how to write the assignment.

I have been studying this new course which is in university since 3 th October. I do not know how is teaching system in there and how to do the assignments which you gave it to me. And it is my first homework which was given by you.

Yesterday you gave us a new hometask for to write at home. But i do not understand how to do the assignment. Because this assignment seems very challenging and difficult to me. It consists of confused numbers and tables and i have never seen such kind of hometask before.

As a solution to the problem, i suggest that we should meet any day after your work. If you want, we will make an appointment to discuss this issue. I think, it is a good idea and after that i will understand how to write the assignment .

Look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,
Durdona

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, i think, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40935672515 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55459585421 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.2585665977 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.0 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1538461538 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358826261947 0.216113520407 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109984485957 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573673969952 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162770791949 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450942101172 0.0580467560999 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.41 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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