You have booked two theater tickets in advance for you and your friend, however due to some reason you are unable to come. Write to your friend about it and say– What is the reason?– Why can’t you move your other commitment to a different time?– S

Dear Igor,

I hope the letter reaches you in the best of health. I feel embarrassed writing to you to inform about failure on my part to abide by the promise made to you. Allow me to elaborate.

As you know, I have been long due for a promotion and due to some office politics I was not being promoted. However, I have recently received an email from my employer intimating me about the promotion. In addition, I have been told to undergo training in Copenhagen which shall commence from 22nd June, 2018. It happens to be falling on the date when you and I had decided to go and watch the newest addition to Marvel Series.

Further, I am sure you know that I hold you very close to my heart and would even go an extra mile to do things for you. However, due the events that have transpired have rendered me unable to commit for the date as well as the remaining week. I was very excited to see the movie with you.

Finally, I would not want you to waste the golden ticket, as we call it. Therefore, I hope that you will look for another partner to take with you.

I hope you understand

Yours sincerely,
Brad Jason

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'June 2018'.
Suggestion: June 2018
...penhagen which shall commence from 22nd June, 2018. It happens to be falling on the date w...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, look, so, therefore, well, i feel, in addition, you know, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33802816901 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31438733223 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596244131455 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7191900781 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0769230769 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355641796755 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123251811902 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722356254141 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203018872506 0.12726935374 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332984981121 0.0580467560999 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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