You have borrowed something from your friend for a party and unfortunately it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend to apologise and say
– What and when did you borrow?
– What happened to it? Why?
– What do you suggest to do about it?
Dear Jack,
I hope this letter finds you well. Thanks so much for lending some CDs and a video camera for Jonathan’s birthday party. Things like that are priceless.
I wish you were here. It was a blast. I ‘m sorry to say that one of the CDs that you had borrowed lent me was completely damaged by my relatives’ children that are too much hyperactive. When I me and Mary, my wife, were hospitalizing my guests, they‘d played were playing in my room. Unfortunately, they had damaged not only my personal belongings such as classic cassettes, but also your “happy birthday songs” album. Its frame was totally broken and the whole of the surface of the CD was badly scratched. Please accept my apologies for what has happened. Please inform me about the way of compensation.
If you like, I‘ll buy a new one or pay the price of the original album. Please do not hesitate to call me about this matter. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Carl Whitely
- You have borrowed something from your friend for a party and unfortunately it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend to apologise and say – What and when did you borrow? – What happened to it? Why? – What do you suggest to do about it? 33
- You have borrowed something from your friend for a party and unfortunately it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend to apologise and say – What and when did you borrow? – What happened to it? Why?– What do you suggest to do about it? 73
- The advantages brought by the spread of English as a "global language" will outweigh the disadvantages. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view? 56
- You have borrowed something from your friend for a party and unfortunately it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend to apologise and say – What and when did you borrow? – What happened to it? Why? – What do you suggest to do about it? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jack, I hope this letter finds you well. Thank...
^^^
Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'belongings'.
Suggestion: belongings
...rtunately, they had damaged not only my personal belongings such as classic cassettes, but also you...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Carl Whitely
^^^
Line 6, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you soon. Best wishes, Carl Whitely
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76704545455 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85346656472 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.472668376 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.9333333333 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7333333333 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197601478458 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636414490845 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439078578819 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130274444129 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259584134397 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.2 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.