You have bought a new mobile phone and in a few days of purchase, it has stopped working. You have spoken to the company representative a week ago but it has still not been repaired.
Dear Sir madam
This is Sadiq one of your regular customer and have always preferred your company for purchasing any new electronic Products. I am writing this letter to complain about my recent purchase of new mobile phone.
I Bought this (x34 ) new phone on 3Rd march 2019 with in a week of purchase I notice that the phone reboots for intervals of every 5 min and get over heated. When I took this phone back to you showroom on 10th arch 2019, Though the phone is under 2 years warranty I was promised by your representative that it will be fixed in a week. However, this is third week by now and got no reply,
This was very frustrating and daunting experience that I have ever experienced with your product and service .
I would appreciate if you could investigate the matter and take serious action and also demand for a replacement
phone or to refund
Hope to hearing from you at the earliest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...about the problem in my new mobile phone . While I have always preferred your sho...
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Line 4, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...room for purchasing any electronic goods . However, this time I am very much dissa...
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Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch dissatisfied with my new mobile phone Which I bought few days ago. I noticed i...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...equently by its self and get over heated . As the mobile phone has warranty of ...
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Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'warrantied'.
Suggestion: warrantied
...ver heated . As the mobile phone has warranty of two years , I gave it to the custome...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e mobile phone has warranty of two years , I gave it to the customer service of yo...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to the customer service of your showroom , ^^
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Line 7, column 599, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...uld be fixed at earliest convenient time . However, it's been three weeks it...
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Line 8, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er, it's been three weeks it's not yet repaired and did not receive any...
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Line 8, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...eceive any prompt response from your end . It was frustrating and daunting experie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.46153846154 4.54256449028 142% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.43817544169 2.54303337028 214% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.725274725275 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.41237113402 135% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.203327479 44.8134815571 375% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.0 76.5299724578 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 7.41237113402 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119810175451 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661224907549 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660398084328 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812639322918 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407090636016 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 8.37731958763 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 70.7449484536 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 7.45979381443 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 20.48 8.71597938144 235% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.