You have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine teaching professional this ad war posted by Mr. John Sullivan, director of the Spanish department at the language institute of Great Britain in London, England. In your letter to Mr. Sullivan explain why you are writing.
Describe your qualification and experience explain how they can contact you.
Dear Mr. Sullivan,
I am Amir Nazaripoor with 32-years-old and I live in London, very close to your office, I worked as a Spanish instructor in two schools for 5 years. I graduated from Madrid university in Spanish literature field of study with high score. Now I want to change my work place because they are too far from my home, and I decided to write you this letter.
I think that, not only is my education background in span very well, but also my five years’ experience in teaching is very worthy for your institute and I know that I can improve your language school level in Spanish. As you know, the best time for learning the second language is when students are teenagers, I should mention that my specialties are in teaching language to kids and teenagers with new methods. Moreover, I wrote a book for students who want to learn essential words in Spanish, and I can put my books on your library with 50% discount.
You can contact with me by email@gmail.com or call me at 9876543210.
Your sincerely,
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| 2019-06-20 | Amir Nazaripoor | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...il@gmail.com or call me at 9876543210. Your sincerely,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, second, so, well, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60655737705 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75924361082 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650273224044 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4058178661 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.428571429 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175415642614 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701627946021 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366133843588 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748901489955 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530243548474 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.