You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one. Write a letter to a friend.
Dear Linn,
I am writing to let you know about my current job and hoping that you could give me some advice. Honestly, I hesitated for a long time and decided to switch to a new job because I feel bored and vapid with my current work. At the same time, I think I need to look for new challenges to refresh myself and widen my knowledge about many other fields, especially in the media sector. Moreover, I also want to try working in a different location.
My goal is to look for new companies that are much bigger and more professional than the old ones. The best things are an international environment and having many good colleagues. Certainly, I will apply for a new position as a beginner in the media companies such as Big Hit or BMC.
Since you have a lot of experience in this field. I was hoping that you could foster me identify some companies that might be a good fit for me.
I look forward to receiving your response at your earliest convenience.
Kisses,
Yoora
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...media companies such as Big Hit or BMC. Since you have a lot of experience in this fi...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, honestly, if, look, moreover, so, i feel, i think, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4364640884 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5894574386 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629834254144 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8665226983 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315935541535 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959637774595 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619148419183 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163627182642 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482956554009 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.