You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one.Write a letter to a friend. In your letter• explain why you want to leave your current job• what kind of job you are looking for• ask for some help or advice

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You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one.

Write a letter to a friend. In your letter
• explain why you want to leave your current job
• what kind of job you are looking for
• ask for some help or advice

Dear,

I hope you have been keeping well. Since 5 years, I am working in an IT based company as a software engineer. Now, I am planning to search out some new job.

Due to working in a sample company for so long, my saturation point in career has reached. I am facing eccentric issues like getting less salary or not getting timely promotion etc.

I need to change my domain and wanted to work as a Business analyst. This shift will add new skills to my resume and help me understand more of the business domain also.

However, being a naïve worker for this domain, I am unable to initiate myself and for this, I greatly need your assistance. As you are working in the business domain from past many years, please suggest or provide some tips, which can help me in learning this domain and make me able to think like an analyst as I’ve my interview scheduled next week.

Hoping to hear back from you soon.

Yours faithfully,
Tanul

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...ng well. Since 5 years, I am working in an IT based company as a software engineer. N...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... understand more of the business domain also. However, being a naïve worker for t...
^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.188775510204 0.220444632235 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.198979591837 0.167888034529 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0714285714286 0.0606518309736 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0561224489796 0.0506257000042 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.102040816327 0.118615021944 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0918367346939 0.107062808482 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0765306122449 0.041066498444 186% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.34482589782 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0408163265306 0.0385302599488 106% => OK
Particles: 0.00510204081633 0.00132118243153 386% => OK
Determiners: 0.0714285714286 0.0714148451538 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0102040816327 0.0191574576366 53% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00510204081633 0.00930345855455 55% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 951.0 1141.60824742 83% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.134020619 83% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52906976744 5.53046319177 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78085437643 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325581395349 0.284621296913 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.191860465116 0.211203875043 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.116279069767 0.133321485273 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0581395348837 0.0843313296314 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34482589782 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656976744186 0.622163163488 106% => OK
Word variations: 65.6114598038 62.8969750728 104% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 15.6363636364 16.4300151701 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.673939582 44.7399317507 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4545454545 90.9928171075 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.4300151701 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.613754768223 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 34.822410148 37.5504026743 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.0 1.13073093955 88% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27386258811 0.331212695627 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0659812160044 0.0927372745006 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0730942843814 0.0736520305886 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.639597674679 0.579516596996 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.178204662576 0.180689518051 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101013358449 0.122183219658 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618803115622 0.0765303033291 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.162873207046 0.211926503985 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.113869616273 0.0737400523855 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149154683102 0.203819188451 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326605901558 0.067151250289 49% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.45360824742 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.0206185567 99% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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