You have decided you need to do more physical exercise. You would like to ask a friend to join you.\Write a letter to this friend. In the letter
Explain why you need to exercise more
Describe what kind of exercise you would like to do
Explain why you need your friend to do it with you
Dear Raghav,
I am writing this letter to you because I feel we both need to start exercises again.
Ever since we took up this job a Call Express International, we have gained 10 Kgs each. As you know our shifts are crazy and as call centre agents we are sitting for over 10 hours. Not to forget the overtime we do.
Since my wife and your sister, Sumana is already playing badminton at JTC club, I was thinking of joining them at least 2 to 3 times per week. If we can manage and play mixed doubles it would be fun too!
Sumana has been asking me to join, I just thought of you too. It would be good for you to start playing like we used to during our school days.
Do think about it as it is needed to get healthy again. Don’t sleep over it like you do for most things.
Looking to hear that you have signed the membership forms soon.
Yours friendly,
Vignesh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Raghav, I am writing this letter to you because ...
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mbership forms soon. Yours friendly, Vignesh
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, at least, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26627218935 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09253392442 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1071559186 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5454545455 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312403268873 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116724866163 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881903327545 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180275112751 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992617315327 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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