You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, and that you want your money back.Explain what happened.What do you want to happen?

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You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, and that you want your money back.
Explain what happened.
What do you want to happen?

Dear Sir,

With regard to the unpleasant experience which I had at your Restaurant last week, I am writing to express my utter disappointment. I had thought of filling the customer complaint form at the Re

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...s so serious an issue, which I believe, is deserving of your urgent attention. World-clas...
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Line 5, column 439, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f soap. As though those were not enough, the waiter steped on my toes twice, on h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, look, may, so, as to, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93301435407 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7701407242 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693779904306 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0361890054 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9166666667 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198451639038 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690718168741 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471648781426 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113962400768 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292505744944 0.0580467560999 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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