You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
• describe a news story in your country
• explain why people are interested in it
• say how the story personally relates to you
Dear Raveena,
How have you been? And how was your trip to Hong Kong? I’m glad you are interested in knowing the situation in India after the recent note ban. Let me tell you in detail what happened.
Just 3 days ago, Mr. Narendra Modi, the Prime Minister of India, to everybody’s bewilderment, announced at midnight that Indian currency notes of rupees 2,000, 1,000 and 500 will be banned or not accepted as a currency anymore. This move was made to reduce the Black Money circulation in the Indian markets. It was a very sudden and unexpected move which had many positive and negative repercussions. The pros of this move were that those who were the actual culprits and were stashing away stacks of money without paying taxes, were in deep trouble because they didn’t have the chance to exchange those notes for valid currency notes and would have to probably to do away with them. The cons of this move were that the common man, for no fault of his, had to que up for hours at banks to exchange their money due to which lots of them were forced to miss work or even stand in the sun without food for long durations. I also faced a lot of hardships because I had recently withdrawn some money to pay my tuition fees, which included notes of Rs. 500 and 1,000, and before I could deposit the same to the university, this news was announced, leaving me no choice but to miss classes the for the next 2 days in order to get them exchanged. The impact of this major decision by the government will be experienced by the Indian citizens for a long time to come.
It’s been quite a week here! In case you have any more questions about this, I will be more than happy to answer.
Warm Wishes,
Aditi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 937.175257732 152% => OK
No of words: 314.0 206.0 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54458598726 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39803841903 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 127.690721649 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601910828025 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 290.88556701 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.1073557611 44.8134815571 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 109.769230769 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0605646309798 0.216113520407 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281935937689 0.0766984524023 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348135292683 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063410434646 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447081153947 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.